Maikeru Hakyo
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Maikeru Hakyo
by Absolut Sat Dec 12, 2009 12:46 am
Maikeru is 22 aged ninja who lost his memory. all he remembers about his past is a bloodshed in a little village somwhere, after losting his memory he have journied around the globe searching for answers about his past. He started to see nightmares one year after losing his memory and now his psychical condition is little strange, illusions etc.
Journy will continue
Journy will continue
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by TheHandSeal Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:25 am
Could use a ton more detail sadly.Mine wasn't great honestly but this could use more detail in my opinion,
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by Izuna Sat Dec 12, 2009 3:09 pm
Absolut wrote:Maikeru is 22 aged ninja who lost his memory. all he remembers about his past is a bloodshed in a little village somwhere, after losting his memory he have journied around the globe searching for answers about his past. He started to see nightmares one year after losing his memory and now his psychical condition is little strange, illusions etc.
Journy will continue
Seems like copypasta..
Born in a poor village....lost memory....whole clan died due to massacre....became emo.....Uri Geller making up Illusions in yoh mind...
dude make a better profile srsly now.
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by Shira Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:15 am
How about you guys shut the fuck up and give some HELPFUL criticism, rather than ranting.
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by Raikhun Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:24 am
Want constructive criticism?
Stop making up emo stories and your clan is dead, bohooo, we had 500 kiddies like that, yes it gets annoying.
How hard is it to be a damn normal ninja, whose family is still alive. had normal grades in academy, wtf is wrong with being normal, shit.
Stop making up emo stories and your clan is dead, bohooo, we had 500 kiddies like that, yes it gets annoying.
How hard is it to be a damn normal ninja, whose family is still alive. had normal grades in academy, wtf is wrong with being normal, shit.
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by Kazu Sun Dec 13, 2009 12:44 am
Well.. Not very creative, you should write more.. It's a little bit short. But I guess you're gonna add more when you start RPing more stuff uh?
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Re: Maikeru Hakyo
by Izuna Sun Dec 13, 2009 8:51 pm
Raikhun wrote:Want constructive criticism?
Stop making up emo stories and your clan is dead, bohooo, we had 500 kiddies like that, yes it gets annoying.
How hard is it to be a damn normal ninja, whose family is still alive. had normal grades in academy, wtf is wrong with being normal, shit.
Horaiz Raikhun....
Elite Jounin
Horaiz Clan living and blooming...
Whats so hard about making good chars?
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